Spinning

spinning

spinning

i cant breathe breathe breath breath breath

spinning 

spinning

heart beat beat beat

spinning

spinning

blur world crashing down

spinning

spinning

tears streaming hot like blood

spinning

spinning

gasps of air and cold water

spinning 

spinning

hand on shoulder back head hug breathe

spinning 

spinning

wake up world still breathe hug breathe beat breathe

spinning

still

Comments

GirlMadeOfIvory

this poem was meant to allude to an anxiety or panic attack but im not sure if it is accurate seeing as i do not have anxiety and have never experienced an anxiety or panic attack. if inaccurate please tell me. thank you and goodbye.

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