Sorry Darling, But I'm Gone.

Gaze into my lifeless eyes

Taken down where darkness lies

You never even said goodbye,

Sorry darling, but I'm gone.

To the moon you curse my name

The only thing that keeps you sane

Pretend it's me, you take your aim

Sorry darling, but I'm gone.

Pray to God you're safe and sound

Even when I'm not around

You're losing hope, you're breaking down,

Sorry darling, but I'm gone.

All alone, you're feeling weak

No one wants to hear you speak

Drowned in drugs you take a drink

Sorry darling, but I'm gone.

Hazy eyes, you slipped and fell

You see my face alive and well

You try to speak a simple Hell-...

Goodbye darling, now you're gone.

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