Somewhere in the World...

Sun, 04/27/2014 - 10:22 -- Loi-Boy


Somewhere in the world, 
A man is born and a happy mother's crying. 
Somewhere in the world,
He is lorn because another's dying. 
Somewhere in the world,
he is looking for food to eat. 
Somewhere in the world,
a man's committing gluttony. 
Somewhere in the world,
a man is loved by everyone around him. 
Somewhere in the world,
he is hated even without kin. 
Somewhere in the world,
I am he and a man is me. 
Somewhere in the world, 
I am either strong or weak. 



I can relate to this poem because like i feel i can be two different people with my strong emotions when i"m strong and confident to when i feel i'm nothing and just mad and sad .You express it with such value amazing work .

***Please check out my work and tell me what you think 

continue to write i would love to read more !!!!

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