Smooth as water

Smooth as water. 

But is water smooth?

Do you think I'm smooth only because you cant grasp me?

Once I solidify and turn into ice will you still like me?

Even when I numb your fingers with frostbite?

You can hold ice as long as you want but what happens when your fingers fall off?

It's ok because I melt for you. I'll always melt for you.

And I'll stick to being as smooth as water. 

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