Smile

During life you should be guile

and achieve your goal.

Be yourself and find your style.

Be kind and cleanse your soul

 

Share your life with someone for a while,

know each other and be one.

Never be in a state of denial, 

just live your life and have fun

 

Remember to never be vile,

and when your days are at an end.

greet death...

with a smile.

 

Comments

Joelsoul22

beautifully written. My only issue is that guile doesn't really work there as i think you intended, and sometimes poems can lose some eaning by adding a rhyme scheme. i would love to see a poem of yours without a rhyme scheme i know it is hard to branch out, and i really think you are a good poet and sometimes versatility can add persepcetive

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