Slow-mo

the world spins

but i cant see

im blind

im past the point

the point of no return

i fear...

for my life

for my heart

for my soul

i dont understand

how could they

be so cruel

if i slow anymore

i will die

i cant finish

i cant start

but i must go on

i NEED to go on

to fight the time

to battle victory

to defeat loss

but i need help

i must push through

i must conquer my enemy

the end

the end of fear

the end of time

else i crumble

else i fall

to my death

to the line

the line of slow

the line of hate

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