Silence is loud

Sun, 09/07/2014 - 13:10 -- jdunton

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Theyre doing it wrong

all, all wrong

but I am yet to tell them.

No, that's no right

youre incorrect

please stop.

They need help

i can do that.

i want to but shouldnt they get the chance to fail?

It's eating me up

let me tell you the way

i want you to be successful

but please be an individual.

ill just be silent

and hope it is louder than your mistake.

 
 
 

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