Shooting Star

My shooting star

my glimmer of hope

flashing acrossed

the never ending universe

a dark abyss of widespread dark matter

Longing. yearning, craving

to find a home 

to find the light

 

My shooting star

takes the breath right out of my mouth

on the dark journey home

aching for just one more glimpse

lingering in my mind far past

the break of dawn

 

My shooting star

an everlasting treasure in my heart

a rare unparralelled manifestation

of extraordinary 

 

My shooting star

you are

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