Shooting Star

Mon, 09/09/2013 - 01:44 -- notu22

I have nothing else in this world

But what's inside my head

All the pain, emotion and thoughts

Of the my loved ones, dead

 

But I know writing wont bring them back.

It always reminds me of who they are.

The time at the park, the time at the beach,

Bringing them back, I need a shooting star.

 

I write not to tell my life's story

I write to let others know they're not alone

Because I know I need help too

Or I wouldnt be dragging my knees on stone

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