Shining Star



Close your pretty eyes,
Let your mind be clear,
give it many tries,
until your vicinity disappears.
Can you feel your sunshine soul?
Can you hear your heart of gold?
Can you perceive your passion for life,
that is utterly rife?
Hey, you beautiful soul,
you really willing to be controlled,
by a hole that dims your light,
a cloud that hides your shine?
No. Choose your own destiny.
now open your eyes,
can't you see?
that power your mind holds,
the beauty of your sunshine soul,
that gorgeous heart of gold.
That is who you really are,
an embellished scar,
a shining star.

This poem is about: 
My family
My community
My country
Our world
Guide that inspired this poem: 



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