The senses of Life

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08648
United States
40° 17' 28.6692" N, 74° 43' 19.2072" W

Why am I trying to live if I'm just living to die?
What am I trying to see if there is nothing in sight?
What am I trying to hear if nothing whispers inside?
What am I trying to feel if the love is so blind?

I am trying to live because the soul never dies,
I am trying to see joy even in the tears that I cry,
I am trying to hear the laughs through the pain,
I am trying to feel the loves that leaves the heart with an everlasting stain

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Lennyjones

First poem actually submitted in hope of getting the scholarship, looking to write more, let me know what you think.

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