self and characters

Mon, 09/22/2014 - 23:11 -- rrobles

thief of innocence's 

taking part of me 

 like a mishap

interference with my true self 

making me into sometime im not

 just a body with no mind

 a soulless mountain top 

 in a everyday life

 i cant wait till

 you find me the true me  

 and not some missleading thing 

no the one you created 

 in all this transgression

 open your eyes 

 and see the true me 

and all its beauty

 going through deceptiion

 getting lost  in it all 

 resulting in never being found

you forge your yourself into who you are

 not into a character 

for all the answers are within you 

 and not beyond 

know thyself 

and all its wonders

 

Comments

rrobles

being yourself and loving oneself is all it take to aspire great things 

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