A Scarlet Botticelli

The violence of roses tangled
in redolent blooms throughout her hair.
“Forgive me,” Venus said to herself,
as she struggled with the piercing layers.

 

She parted her tangled strands
like the turbulent sea had parted her shell,
within this brume around curly waves
of blood and blonde so frail.

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