saying goodbye!

Sun, 09/15/2013 - 14:50 -- jflores

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All packed up to go 

when he said he never would leave

Your moment has come 

I'm not prepared to say  goodbye

My heart is crying in the inside

I feel i can't breath

Your eyes have closed

Your breath has stopped

I can't hug you no more 

And i see you in the box 

and i feel peace

You're just another angel in my soul

Time goes by

Pain is there

Oh god cure my pain 

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jflores

how i espress my pain after his gone.

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