I enter many slams yet i dont get any feedback

Are my poems weak

What do I have to tweak

To make it better not only for me

Im losing it but I am trying to control it

before I blow a lid

but let's not forget that I do try and it blows my mind how you

can careless but oh well I did what i can and live like and or Who I am


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