A Rumbling inside

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There's a rumbling inside.

The empty feeling inside me,

seeping into my soul.

It shot pain up my chest and into my lungs.

This brought the slow warmth of pain and aching,

into my chest.

As I reached,

For something to eat.

Because I'm freaking hungry.

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