This Ring

Tue, 04/25/2017 - 03:18 -- 1SP

I found comfort with this ring,
Peace as I hear my soul sings;
An eternity of song for you and I,
Every time I feel you nearby.
 

Nothing compares to how much,
I get electrified by a single touch;
Even when you are not around,
You are in this ring to I am bound.
 

This ring is my profession of our love,
This ring is my protection from above,
I commit to you again as a year's past;
Vow to you and God, assured to last.
 

...with this ring.
 

There is pleasure when we trust,
Being together in prayer saved us;
So overblessed for you to be mine,
A rib only God set out for me to find.
 

The favor of God covers us both,
Through journeys of marital growth;
We are rejoice today without cursory,
Because God gave us an anniversary.

 

 

This ring is my profession of our love,
This ring is my protection from above,
I commit to you again as a year's past;
Vow to you and God, assured to last.
 

...with this ring.
 

Happy Anniversary.

This poem is about: 
Me
My family

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Amen

this ring represents God's covenant, your wife, and unity

well said

promote this poem to my group

check out my other poems brother

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