Rhythm

Sat, 06/28/2014 - 11:31 -- grimlk1

 


 the clock

on your bedroom wall

keeps ticking 

keeps time 

without you.

cruel.

with its endless ticking.

time continues passing

like nothing is missing.

 life keeps rhythm

 

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