remission

he said that God didn't show him a vision of me,

that God usually gave him visions of people who're spirit filled. 

he talked to me as if i needed to go under the water, 

as if i needed to repent 

and be baptized 

for the forgiveness and remission of my sins. 

after two nights in the world

i think i do. 

 

 

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