Reformation

First comes sin and realizing that separation.
And then there is a choice and with that comes dedication.
Then you have the cleansing of filth, by the blood that in Christ it can only be done, manifestation
Recreation by my faith there's no agony
No degradation because that's the past me.
And by my change I close the separation
And open up a world to communication
To my father, my new home, my new nation
And forever more I have peace and reconciliation.(poems go here)

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Welshman12

You have a lot more courage than I do in spreading the gospel. I would encourage you to continue while refining your poetry skills. Maybe this is just me, but a consistent meter is more appealing than a consistent rhyme.

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