recipe for brown eyes

it feels like i’ve

finally figured out how

they made your eyes:


add one spoonful of

honey sweeter than any

words i’ve ever written;


three cups of light

straight from the sunset

and just as warm;


a pinch of ancient

amber and the knowledge

that comes with it;


the smell of warm

cookies on a day

the sky is grey;


and a sleepy awakening

before the sun has

even greeted the day.


mix well and place

in a perfect face

with a warm smile;


add one boy who

wants only to be

part of that warmth.



omg I love this poem. It definitely reminds me of someone special!

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