"Raptured"

We crossed paths in the night sky
As the Angels fought about us
We found something they'd never know
"Such a love lost In heaven "
God said as he sent us to hell
Making every moment last
Looking at gold in its immortal form
I kiss you one more time
Before our seconds
Recreate the days
Empty pastures
Full of lust
A rebellious kind of love
You look at me one last time
With those eyes
Innocence
"I'll go ,
as long as I'm with you ,
I'll follow
My thoughts went ablaze
You laid your heart in my hands
Not angry at me nor god
For tampering with our plans
An earthly weight falls upon my shoulders
As they close the gate
Your kiss
Your touch
One last time

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