Raging Sea

Thu, 01/30/2020 - 21:26 -- Aripari

Raging sea, inside of me. Inside my mind I'll forever be. Anger turns to madness. Joy turns to sadness. I crumble and fall. I grasp and I claw; and yet, still I lose it all. I beg and I crawl. Please take this pain away, I plead. Cut me, stab me and watch me bleed. Face down in my own blood. Wrap me in your arms, so that I can open up my heart and let my emotions flood.

This poem is about: 
Me

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J3

I think this is my favorite of your poems rn. Vivid imagery. Good internal rhymes. Good vowel and slant rhymes. Emotion. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ”Ÿ

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