questions of concern

I search, I seek but still i can never find the reason to your actions. From the way we were both settle i never though such a thing woould happen this way. From your far distance can you reach a hand out and feel my heart. i think twice i think a thousand times to why you did what you did. But still no love is in the air. May i ask these Questions Can you hear me when i bend down to my knees, can you givve a pat on the back in say everything will be alright . The next morning after i wake you from dreaming of you i can feel ma swealing eyes and all empty inside and i think could this be the end.

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