'Problems' ... A Poem written by Big Virge 16/10/2017

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United Kingdom

It’s Pretty CLEAR That NONSENSE....
Causes Us... PROBLEMS... !!!
But Some Are Caused By MORE Than Flaws... !!!
Some Are Displayed Because of Our Age...
Ya See When Young Lacking Experience...
Can Make Your Problems... SERIOUS... !!!!
When Old Well Ya Know The Old Memory... Goes..........
And That Can Cause Problems That Can’t Be Fixed By Solvents...
Or Drugs Like Coc’ So....... SLOW That Roll.... !!!
Before It Takes A TOLL On Your Body And Soul... !!!
Like... BROKEN Bones As Old Age GROWS... !!!
That CREATE HOLES BEYOND Your Control.... !!!!!!
Some YOU CAN... But You Have To Plan...
To Leave PROBLEMS DAMNED BEHIND Doors You SLAM... !!!
But Problems RISE If You’re NOT WISE... !!!
And Choose To Live Life Using LIES As Your Guide... !?!
You See The Problem With LYING Is That It Leaves The TRUTH DYING... !!!
Which Can Be PROBLEMATIC...
If You Face AUTOMATICS And PROBLEMS That Are TRAGIC... !!!
Because You Couldn’t MANAGE TRUTH That Causes... DAMAGE... !!!
To LIES That CLEARLY RAVAGE MUCH More Than CANNIBAL Savage... !!!!!
You See CARELESS Acts Can Breed PROBLEMS ........... FACT ......... !!!!!
Indeed Hollywood Clans Seem To USE Their Hands In Various Acts ...
That Cause PROBLEMS That Revolve Around SEX... !!!!!
And ABUSIVE Ends That Some RESENT... !!!
But Enough About THEM And Their World of Pretence... !!!!!
As I Said BEFORE PROBLEMS Come FORTH... !!!
When Age Resorts To Affecting Our Minds... !!!
Believe PROBLEMS RISE To The Point Where You Find...
That You CAN'T Memorise Poetic Designs From INTRICATE Rhymes...
Like These That I Write And Sometimes Recite...
It’s A Problem Designed By Old... Father Time... !!!
Now A Lack of Vision Is A Problem Conditioned... !!!
To KEEP You Blind And UNABLE To Find...
A Way For Your Eyes To Retain CLEAR SIGHT...
When It Comes To The Plight of ... Relationship STRIFE...
ESPECIALLY When It Involves A CHILD... !!!
But Those Are Lines For Another Time...
As Are PROBLEMS Caused By The Feds' And Governments...
And Nowadays YES ... CERTAIN Presidents ... !!!
And That Right There Is Simply Where...
This Piece Should END ...

............ That I’ve Called ............

..................... “ PROBLEMS “ ................

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