Please Excuse the Cheesy Analogy.

Sun, 07/14/2013 - 21:50 -- LJeakes

We are like the sun and the moon.

Where, we're different,

but still somehow the same.

Where, we are never near each other

and constantly missing each other.

Where, together, we give meaning to life.

But even the sun and the moon

have those rare occurences

when they collide,

for a moment,

and shine brillaintly.

If, then, I can only have you for a moment

like the sun and the moon,

then the brilliance of it will outshine everything.

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