A Perfect World

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I sit at night, watching the stars

Dreaming of a world without scars

 

No hate or frears 

No war or tears

 

A world where no one lies

A world where no one dies

 

A perfect world to say the least

Where laughter will never cease

 

All of us a family, sharing a home

Caring and loving in a place to roam

 

No bleeding or sickness

Just beauty and fairness

 

Yes, a world where love we would feel

How I wish a world like that could be real

Comments

willcam

Nice! I really like this! And yes, a utopia would be great. Especially a place where no one was unhappy. And everyone worked together. I love the rhythm of this poem. Great work!

Kayla10cat

Simple, nice, great poem!

oliviagavilan

simple and elegant, but I don't feel that you touched the emotion of the poem. I didn't really connect. The imagery is nice, but the emotion isn't quite there. 

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