Pen Dance

My pen bops and moves in slow cadence
To the soft throb of melodic words; inviting poetry
Come; partake in this great celebration
Of freedom and sovereignty
Earned from fiery struggles burnt into our history like cane
Not by fame or favour; but with sweat and fortitude,
For love of country this freedom came
In sleepless nights and endless toil to battle rule of crown
Fathers of our nation, brothers of our soil
You who travail with determination and triumph
Hurdling systems of political barriers and fierce foreign strife
To liberate this country from clutch of colony
How your tears must have flowed to bring us this liberty
Though, now silenced into the night
And in your peaceful eminence lie
Yet still, your coat of glory wears
It's my prayer that you will hear;
It is for you I do this pen dance
Like a flag, I raise this poem high
Hail, accept my gratitude and praise

Comments

1456614

This truly is Power Poetry. I commend you. You should consider performing this poem. Your words are so powerful, you can feel them even as you read them on a screen---imagine their impact would they be read aloud!

Cheryl Griffith

Thank  you for reading my poem and for such a lovely comment. It's very encouraging to have others read and comment on your work. Please feel free to read more and comment it is much welcome.

I did perform this poem once in my country where I live. 

Again thanks.

powerful.imani

Whoa this poem is deeper then the sea. The way you describe the emotions and the title just made it so much better . I enjoyed my read that I readied it twice . Very powerful message and powerful words . I love this poem excellent job . I'm so excited to read more of your poetry 

check out my poetry and hopefully it inspire you and other 

keep up the good work 

Cheryl Griffith

Thank you so much I am please to hear you enjoyed it please feel free to visit my page, read and comment because your opinion matters.

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