A Peasant"s Cry for an Undeserving Love

Like the Astronomer longs for the moon,I can no longer part from thine endowments,This dream infested fool must beseech thee soon, For all we share is but a few moments.Your pull, my love causes these waves crash down,their passionate cry drags me underneath,Loss of breath from my grasping breast tis here I drown!I shout to the sky, my moon I bequeath!Here a Goddess treads before thine own eye,undeserving of such vision divine,My body quakes, it anticipates to fly,Absorb thine uncertainty for I bask in my loves shine!A truth so warm I know the earth is round,How is it that I deserve loves sound. 

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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