Peaceful World

I practice to make perfectin learned lessons/
When love is the message your filled with this essenca that's precious/
A world full of blessings I'm stressing but no more confessions/
I'm guessing peace is perfect if only we can address and interpret/
A message that's well worth it/
Temtaptions swept over the nation millions of faces/
No patience good gracious/
A girl chased with a dream that she chases/
Such potential is wasted what simple amazement/
Small thoughts with large paces no embracement/
My life is hectic soul perfected/
Look in the mirror no reflection/
The price is wrong Bob so here's the correction/
Life never stops like the world spining/
Life is a race and only rich are winning we can be optimistic/
Or keep moaning, complaing, whining, and missing/
In my mind a peaceful world is what I invision.

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