Paradoxes

Wed, 06/19/2013 - 10:47 -- jovick7

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81503
United States
39° 1' 49.332" N, 108° 29' 13.0416" W

A loop rules that which you are
but that which I am you all mar
and strike with heathen-like shouts,
telling me to please, please get out.
But you never screamed this out,
you screamed nothing and hurt yourself
with the puncture to your health
that we also know as pleasure.
The blind now see the fissure.

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