Pain and Gain

Location

33559
United States
28° 9' 13.5972" N, 82° 24' 56.4588" W

Broken heart.
False start.
Pain.
But Gain.
It was so hard
To get this far,
But I now know,
People can put on a great show.

I thought it was true.
I thought I knew.
I put in my all,
Only to fall.
But next time I will know
How to look for that show,
And I will be strong
And hopefully not wrong.

Love is meant to feel great,
The way we did on that first date.
But if two people aren't meant to be,
You best agree,
To save the pain
And find another gain.

Comments

Bonesgibson93

Sounds really good :)

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