Overlooked

Yes everything may be awesome 

but what strikes me most 

is the light filtering throught the trees

and the pen gliding across 

starch

white 

paper

see everything is there to be seen 

but not everything is seen

so I think the most awesome part 

is that which is overlooked

the awesome way the sunshine beats 

across the forgotten lakes

the awesome way the trees bow down

before the coming dawn

the awesome way a newborn fawn

struggles across the moor

the awesome way the river 

claims all in its path

the awesome way that God above

sees all of this and laughs

This poem is about: 
Our world

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