With Out A Cost

Mon, 04/22/2013 - 10:23 -- TGrillz

No gain without a loss.
No love with out a cost.
Simplicity won't ever be reality.
Reality will never be realistic.
dreams, that's where I come from.
Dreaming, that's what I'm doing.
Happiness, that's what I'm pursuing.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

your poem reflects the belief of hope will happen again
pursue your happiness and never settle for less
great job
expand your ideas futhers

TGrillz

Thank you!
I try to write honest emotins, and shed light on possible success! I actually rap, but in a sense rapping is poetry :)
Thanks for the comment!

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