Our Fellow Man

Mourning the loss of a fellow man


The loss of character and diligence.


His body is perfectly fine


his heart is still beating


and oxygen fills his lungs.


air brings goosebumps to his skin.


The air from the words he speaks.


Tearing down the next strong willowed tree


that dare grow near him.


Bark for paper


what else is it for?


 


Leaves fall and they change


colors begin to go


first green, yellow, red


then brown as they crumble or dangle for that last second.


Hanging onto that branch as a last relative choice


until they sway side to side


when they finally reach their destination.


We see he roots become pulled from the ground


and a hole lies within the earth.


Once a tree was strong and bold


deep with in earth's soil


only to be taken and uprooted.


Dollars make the world go round.


 


Money is a root of evil


intertwined with various things.


deep within earth's soil


unlike the tree it's everlasting.


until the day we all shall leave


and sway back up from side to side


down from the trees our hopes shall fall


Envy occupies our fellow man.

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