Osteoporosis//Remission

Mon, 05/27/2013 - 12:10 -- crhaith

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73401
United States
34° 10' 5.2176" N, 97° 8' 9.3768" W

My back just broke
Please help me get better
Broken bones, broken hearts,
They’re all the same, rather.

You see, when part of you is aching
You feel so weak
When parts of you start breaking
Things look so bleak.

But why,
When we’re aching, why do we focus on the pain
When the only thing we should focus on is everything we gain

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