Orion's suicide

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90032
United States
34° 4' 46.2612" N, 118° 10' 35.8644" W

My heart shattered into a million pieces
and the wind blew the remnants across the sky,
So that they may shine like bright stars
among the Heavens at night,
My breath stung like winter’s chill
and it froze me to my core,
My tired knees grew very weak
and then I was no more,
Dear ghost in the water
Please let me rest in peace,
as I drown in seas of nothingness
My soul is yours to keep.

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