Open Eyes

Life descends upon us unawares

living is a beauty so beguiling


As a human subject to her whim

how could you not embrace her smiling?


To awaken with such potential

requite her gift with time you're biding


This poem is about: 
Our world



I would really like an opinion on my poem "Open Eyes."

I worked on it for a long while and I'm hoping it's any good. 

Some feedback and criticism would be appreciated. Thank you!

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