Open Brokenness (my first song)

Fri, 09/18/2020 - 00:25 -- Nomad1c

From Muscle Shoals
to Marstons Mills
they drank their beers
and took their pills.
Leaving those on wings of doves
like broken hearted youth in love.

Staying strong,
yes moving on
singing songs
til comes the dawn
Singing songs
Singing songs
By singing songs I move along
.
Staying strong with brokenness
I cry to you in openness.

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