Oh how I love her

The eyes lock for a split second

the tension is in the air 

glance over for a quick check in

my heart is in despair. 

how i long to hold her

and caress her hair

how i long to wife her and 

rock in old rocking chairs

she is my solidity my everlasting love

weve hardly just met 

but our bond tighter then a glove 

time passes on and we wed each other

as i look from my rocking chair i say

"oh how i love her"

Comments

emiltee

The most preciuos story I've ever read in such beautiful format under 100 words.

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