OBSESSION

<- OBSESSION ->

manifests itself directly from deep -> LONGING

that occurs due to unmet -> HUNGER

& stems from daunting -> DESIRE

that grew out of an abyss of -> EMPTINESS!

~ by Debi Lyn 08/26/22

 

 

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Debi Lyn

Looks much better as a jpg or png, or whatever Paint saved it as... had a border, color, and way better font! grrr

Debi Lyn

<- OBSESSION ->

manifests itself directly from deep -> LONGING

that occurs due to unmet -> HUNGER

& stems from daunting -> DESIRE

that grew out of an abyss of -> EMPTINESS!

 

 

Yes, so the ABYSS of emptiness grows DESIRE

and HUNGER, which when UNMET,

produces a deep LONGING that just sorta hangs there

and can easily become an obsession 

 

How to CONTROL the obsession..............

surely lies in the ROOTS of emptiness. sigh

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