Now what?

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I love him, 

But nothings the same,

the love has grown so dim,

I wanted us back, but it never came,

I love him,

but I'm so done with this damn game.

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onesmoothpoet

SNAPSS

tanpr9

Great poem!
I definitely can relate.

Elizabeth Davis

i agree!

i can totaly relate too! 

Elizabeth Davis

I like this. its full of amoshun and you did it to wear i could feel what the poem felt :)

Finesse'

umm that was nice. You should elaborate on the game he was playing. 

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