Noticed

Jude 16 King James Version (KJV)

16 These are murmurers, complainers, walking after their own lusts; and their mouth speaketh great wellingwords, having men's persons in admiration because of advantage.

 

Noticed

 

The option to be noticed

works all the time.

Most every one will fall for it

not knowing tension's climb.

 

It is amazing to see the human mind

grasping to be seen.

To be recognized by a stranger

for things it has never been.

 

It would be more efficient

for want to be noticed by the Lord.

One does not have to act foolish

to be recognized for true worth.

 

You don't have to worry

or mankind likes your style,

as long as God is with you.

You'll be important, not a file

 

So “my Oh! my” or another cry

will not be clearly heard,

until a person changes self

and accept someone else's worth.

 

Achieved what he wanted,

he got attention, not deserved.

Can things be solved by talking

for impressions to be heard.

 

Is emptiness so positive

that it fills its full desire?

Or is the fake of it so massive

that it over-runs the barrel?

 

Jan Wienen

 

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