Notice me

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I’m screaming shouting
Crying sobbing
CAN YOU HEAR ME??!
do you even care?
standing on the edge
One step from the finale
The end.
Do you care yet?
Releasing blood from these gashes in my arms
Do you care yet?
Popping all these pills
Do you care yet?
Please,
Please
Care.
One step and I’ll be done
No more pain!
no more worries
I look down
I see
No
One
No
Thing ..
But I can’t jump.
I’m
Waiting
For
You.
Please, care.
Come and walk me away from the edge. 
Talk me off the ledge.
Give me your hand,
Swear you’ll stay.
Love me.
Please.
But I look back.
I see no one.
Nothing.
I jump.
You don’t care.
You won’t care.
You
Never
Cared.

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