nothing’s more beautiful than a woman in tears

Fri, 09/13/2013 - 01:03 -- mnissan

She cries

Because he thinks it’s beautiful when girls cry

She lets the tears descend

like people down a mountain

on her peaches and cream


She lets her tears splash

like the waves of the ocean

that bring heartsick sailors 


She lets her tears collapse 

across her face

like weary lovers


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