New Strive

 

This achievement is not alone mineCredit goes to all who really felt fineOn learning about another feather in my capI deserved this distinct though after a long gap The road to the hilltop was not at all straightI had to stand all downfalls till signalled by fateTimes when the flame of hope was blowing outAgainst my invincible self slowly grew a doubt Some corners seethed with disbelief and envyYet another lot had forgot the general courtesyConcern I do have for them loaded with sympathyWhen shall you beak comparing and become happy?  Now that the struggle to establish has endedMy desire to excel in this field has not fadedWith great power comes responsibility they sayLaced with next strive is arriving the new day 

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