The New Man: The Interlude

His eyes were different than those of my previous lover.

They were not colored

or 

"pretty"

But he gazed into my eyes a different way. 

He said he saw my whole future in my eyes

my motives

but

he has moved on with his life

He goes to college

But he might be the one i have been looking for 

a while

But i say 

Let's try

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