Need to do Better

Wed, 11/30/2016 - 21:31 -- Chez

Nice job, kid.
You did it again.
You pissed people off
And you let the madness in.

 

When you know it only hurts you,
You let the anger rule.
When you know the effects stay with you,
You acted like a fool.

 

Amazing plan, kid.
You could have let it go.
Instead you lost control of yourself
And let the whole world know.

 

I know you can do better, kid.
You must not let them in.
Fight off the voices inside your head
And regain your peace within.

 

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Comments

Chez

I guess I just need to keep it together, but writing really is a life saver for me.

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