The Necesities of Change

The school needs to change, that much is sure.


it has a bad heart that needs to be cured.


It needs more students from various places, 


not shy rude people with similar faces.


We need better materials, better objects and tools,


not juryrigged objects perfect for fools.


We need to also receive some attention


but also proper intelligence retention.


There are too many things that this school need,


so we should find out and then take heed.


but soon, however, some wont care


because, next year, they wont be there.    

Comments

JoelT1412

the part in relation to the student body, because everyone there has a problem with it.

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