Nappy Headed Hoes

The martial arts Muslim sees six nappy headed hoes bullying a biracial girl and I'll tell you why;

It's because the biracial girl is pretty and polite and that's no lie.

 

The martial arts Muslim walks towards the nappy headed hoes immediately;

He tells the evil hoes to leave the biracial girl alone, as you can see.

 

The nappy headed hoes try to attack the Muslim, which is a stupid thing to do;

The Muslim punches and kicks two of the nappy headed hoes, which is true.

 

The martial arts Muslim elbows and kicks the other three nappy headed hoes;

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He delivers a martial arts chop to the last nappy headed ho and flips her to the ground, which is great;

The nappy headed hoes are full of hate.

 

The biracial girl thanks the martial arts Muslim for rescuing her, which is nice;

The hearts of the nappy headed hoes are cold as ice.

 

The martial arts Muslim calls the police, which is smart;

The Muslim continues to practice the martial arts.

 

When the police arrive to arrest the nappy headed hoes, the martial arts Muslim goes away;

The nappy headed hoes are a disgrace to their race and gender and that's all I have to say.

Comments

Annette M Velasquez

When I saw the title... I just had to read this. This is definitely innovative and " different"- it put me in thought of a surreal animation strip, I could imagine it drawn... like the martial arts Muslim is a superhero of sorts. The creativity and imagination here are the strong points, also the vivid description.

hotidris

Sounds you like you really enjoyed my poem, Annette.  

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